SHE WAITED, SHE WEPT... STILL NO ANSWER | PART ONE
The afternoon sun leaned low, stretching long shadows across the compound walls. A quiet breeze stirred the dry leaves gathered at the rusty gate, their scratching sound carrying the smell of dust into the air.
Inside her small house, Sister Joyce knelt on the bare cement floor. Her knees were raw from endless prayers, her body weary, her tears dried but her heart heavier than before. The silence of the room pressed down like a weight.
Morning after morning she bowed at her bedside, lips trembling with the same words. Night after night her pillow was soaked with tears. The pale walls had become witnesses to her sighs, and the ceiling above seemed like brass that shut out every cry.
Her eyes lifted faintly, lips parted at last, her voice barely above a whisper.
“Does God still hear me? Why do the heavens feel so far?”
Her words trembled into the stillness. The ticking clock on the wooden shelf mocked her, each second echoing her unanswered prayers. Her faith flickered like a dying lamp.
She rose slowly, pressing her head against the wooden frame of her bed, her chest still heaving under sorrow.
The silence seemed to thicken as if the heavens refused to speak back. Her lips quivered, parting on a trembling breath.
“Lord… I have prayed, but where is the answer? Have You forgotten me?”
The faint crow of a cock drifted from the neighborhood, piercing the silence. Her eyes burned with unshed tears, and her fingers clutched the bedsheet for comfort.
Thoughts of God’s promises wrestled with doubt in her weary soul. Finally, longing for human comfort, she turned to her friend Jennifer.
By afternoon, the heat pressed against the dusty roadside as the two walked together. Motorbikes roared past with fumes trailing, while the faint call of hawkers rose from the market square.
Jennifer slowed her steps, her gaze softening as she noticed the heaviness written on Joyce’s face and the trembling of her shoulders. She tilted her head slightly, lips parting gently to speak.
“Joyce… are you alright? You seem… heavy today.”
Joyce bit her lip, pausing as her eyes lifted briefly toward the burning sky, as though begging for an answer that would not come. Her chest tightened as she forced the words out.
“I… I’ve been praying, Jennifer. Every day, every hour, but it’s like… God isn’t listening. My heart aches, and I don’t know what else to do.”
The market’s chaos dimmed, swallowed by the weight of her confession. Silence wrapped around them, thick and expectant.
Jennifer stepped closer, her hand reaching out, fingers brushing Joyce’s with deliberate warmth. Her eyes softened, a quiet strength glowing in the curve of her smile. Her lips parted slowly, voice low, carrying the calm of assurance.
“Joyce, I know why your prayers have no answer. There is a man of God I know—powerful, full of visions. If you follow me to him, all your problems will be solved.”
Joyce’s hand trembled inside Jennifer’s, but she did not pull away. Her eyes fell to the cracks in the dusty road, tracing them as if they could guide her out of her confusion.
Her lips parted on a trembling breath, voice barely audible, carrying the weight of countless unanswered prayers.
“I’ve prayed so long… begged so earnestly… yet nothing comes. Am I not faithful enough? Or is it something I’ve done wrong?”
The question lingered, touching even the air between them. Jennifer’s eyes softened further, her tone carrying a weight of conviction.
“Joyce, I’ve seen God move through this man of God. He doesn’t just speak—he sees. He hears the prayers that feel lost, and he shows the way. You don’t have to carry this alone.”
Her words stirred a faint spark, yet Joyce’s heart trembled between hope and fear. She hesitated, lips parting slowly.
“I… I don’t know, Jennifer. What if… what if I go and nothing changes? What if my prayers still… still don’t reach Him?”
Jennifer squeezed her hand gently, her smile firming with certainty, and her voice lifted with quiet assurance.
“Sometimes, God answers through the faithful ones around us. Let him guide you. Just come with me. You’ll see.”
The dusty breeze swept between them as Joyce lowered her gaze, the weariness in her heart clinging desperately to this fragile rope of hope. At last, she nodded faintly. Her lips trembled on the words, voice barely above the wind.
“If he can help… I will go.”
Her eyes flickered with the faintest light of expectation. Together they walked down the sunlit road, their shadows stretching long across the stones.
Soon they reached a small clearing where a broad tree cast its shade over a wooden chair. Birds chirped faintly, yet the air carried a strange heaviness, as if waiting. Joyce’s pulse quickened as Jennifer led her into a dim house nearby.
The wooden door creaked shut behind them. Thick cloths covered the windows, choking out daylight. The air smelled of burning oil and strange herbs. A weak lamp flickered, throwing light across bottles of colored water, feathers, and stones that shimmered faintly on a low table.
From the shadows, a tall man stepped forward — Prophet Miracle. His eyes gleamed as he welcomed them. He gestured toward two worn chairs. His voice rolled, smooth and steady, commanding attention.
“Please, sit. Make yourselves comfortable. There is no need to stand.”
The room seemed to tighten as Jennifer guided Joyce to sit. The chair felt cold, the dim glow of the strange objects reflecting in Joyce’s anxious eyes. Jennifer cleared her throat, her tone earnest as she leaned forward slightly.
“Prophet Miracle, this is my friend Joyce. She has been praying—day and night—but feels her prayers are unanswered. Her heart is heavy, full of sorrow. She seeks God’s face, but no answer comes. I believe you are the most powerful man of God in our generation… who could help her.”
The prophet leaned closer, the lamp casting shadows across his face. His eyes glimmered with an unsettling confidence. After a pause, his voice flowed low and firm.
“You may leave us now, Jennifer. This is between me and her.”
The air thickened. Jennifer’s lips pressed together, uncertainty flashing in her eyes. She squeezed Joyce’s shoulder gently, whispered something faint, then rose. The floorboards groaned as she stepped toward the door. When it closed behind her, the silence deepened.
Joyce sat stiffly, her fingers knotting together on her lap. The bottles glowed faintly as the prophet’s gaze pierced through her. Her lips parted on a trembling breath, eyes cast downward, heart heavy with unanswered prayers.
“Man of God… I… I’ve been praying… so long, but… nothing comes. I don’t know why.”
The prophet raised his hand slowly, his voice swelling with authority, though his eyes darted briefly at her small handbag.
“You have gone through a lot. I want to assure you that you are at the right place, where heavy challenges are solved.”
Joyce’s hands clenched briefly in her lap, lips parting in a rapid, almost desperate exhale.
“Amen!”
The chamber seemed to hold its breath, the air thick and taut with an eerie stillness. Shadows clung to the corners as the prophet leaned closer, each movement deliberate, measured, commanding attention.
His lips parted slowly, voice low but firm, carrying the weight of authority and certainty.
“For God to answer your cry, you must go through cleansing. Bring salt, black soap, and a white cloth. With these rituals, the spirits blocking your prayers will leave you. Only then will God hear.”
The smell of herbs thickened as his words lingered. Joyce’s lips trembled, doubt flickering faintly in her eyes.
“Man of God… are you sure that after I do all this—this cleansing with salt, black soap, and the white cloth—God will answer my prayers? Will He really hear me?”
Prophet Miracle leaned forward, his eyes locking onto hers, his voice steady, almost hypnotic.
“I assure you, the spirits blocking your prayers will leave. Only then will God hear you. Follow my instructions faithfully, and your prayers will not return empty.”
Joyce’s chest rose with a slow, deliberate breath. Her knuckles tightened in her lap, fingers pressing into one another as if holding onto courage.
After a long pause, her head bowed, surrender threading through the motion. Her lips parted softly, voice steady despite the trembling undercurrent.
“Alright… I will do as you say.”
The prophet gave a slight nod, his eyes gleaming with hidden satisfaction. Joyce rose carefully, her heart beating fast, and stepped out of the chamber.
The door creaked open, letting afternoon light spill across Joyce’s face, soft and golden. Outside, Jennifer lingered, body leaning slightly forward, eyes scanning with a mix of concern and curiosity.
The air between them hung thick with anticipation. Her lips parted gently, voice low, leaning into the space as if drawing Joyce out.
“So… how did it go?”
Joyce exhaled, her voice carrying both relief and uncertainty.
“He said… I must do a cleansing. Salt, black soap, a white cloth… then he says God will hear.”
Jennifer’s lips curved into a faint smile, though her eyes betrayed an unreadable depth.
“Alright. Let’s go home. We can prepare everything there.”
The two women walked down the dusty path together. Motorbikes rumbled in the distance, market cries rose faintly, and the fading sun painted the road in gold.
Joyce’s heart swirled with fear and hope, fragile as smoke in the wind. Yet she clung to that small flicker of promise, following Jennifer’s steady steps into the deepening afternoon.
To be continued...
Written by Agbemawle Atsu Norvishi
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