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STAINS ON THE CROSS | PART FOUR

Atmospheric 8K image of a sunlit cross in a peaceful courtyard surrounded by trees and greenery, including the ©Aatsujnk watermark in the top right.

Evening settled gently over Jemimah’s room. The last light of the day filtered through the curtains, turning the fabric into a faint amber glow as the sun dipped low. Folded clothes rested neatly on the bed. 

Jimmi stood before the mirror, adjusting her earrings with careful fingers, her reflection steady. Jemimah watched her, delight bubbling over, and clapped her hands as laughter filled the room.

​A playful spark danced in the air before Jemimah’s voice burst through the room, bright and teasing, as if she could no longer contain her triumph.

Jemimah (beaming):
Ah-ah! Look at you! Even I am jealous!

The laughter lingered as Jimmi turned slowly from the mirror, folding her arms lightly across her chest. Her eyes sharpened with a new, cold clarity, her tone tightening as a different kind of resolve took hold.

Jimmi (firm):
Now... take me to your brother.”

The room stilled for a heartbeat before Jemimah erupted into loud laughter, bending slightly as she shook her head, the sound bouncing off the walls.

Her amusement spilled out carelessly, her voice ringing with a mock disbelief that made Jimmi’s newfound resolve feel suddenly out of place.

Jemimah (laughing):
You’re serious? Just like that? Am I the one marrying you off? Relax. You’re rushing things.”

Jimmi’s brows drew together. Her lips pressed into a thin line as a cold disappointment settled deep in her chest. Her words came out restrained but wounded, slicing through the remnants of Jemimah’s laughter.

Jimmi (hurt):
You are heartless.”

Jemimah waved a dismissive hand, pacing lightly as though brushing the weight of the moment aside. Her tone shifted—a blend of teasing and defensive carelessness.

She spoke as if the truth were obvious, her words spilling faster than thought.

Jemimah (dismissive):
Uhm… everyone knows you’ve changed. Even if you tried to return to your old ways, do you think they would still take you seriously? You had better accept who you are now. Haha… Jimmi!

Jimmi’s smile barely surfaced—faint, tired, and strained. It flickered like a dying candle before her eyes lowered, then lifted again with a quiet, flint-like determination.

Her voice steadied, calm but final, as though drawing a line in the dust that she would not cross back over.

Jimmi (resolved):
Let me make one thing clear—if I do not marry him, our friendship ends here.”

She turned and walked out. The door closed softly behind her, the sound gentle yet final, leaving the room hollow.

Jemimah sank onto the bed as silence rushed in to fill the space Jimmi had occupied. Her laughter vanished, replaced by a cold, creeping dread. 

She covered her face with her hands, her shoulders trembling as the weight of her own pride crashed over her. Her voice slipped out barely above a whisper, heavy with guilt.

Jemimah (whispering):
Oh God… what have I done?

The room seemed to press closer as her thoughts unraveled. She spoke again, tone broken, confessing to the empty space.

Jemimah (ashamed):
I thought I was wise, but I’ve acted foolishly. My plan was never about marriage. I just wanted her to look less ‘holy’ so people would stop mocking me. Why can’t she understand?

Later that night, Jimmi sat on her bed, books spread before her. The ceiling fan creaked softly above, stirring warm air in slow circles. The room was quiet—too quiet—until a knock echoed gently on the door.

Jimmi lifted her head, her breath pausing as she listened to the hollow space between the knocks. Her voice came out steady but guarded, a shield against the silence.

Jimmi (alert):
Yes... who is there?

From the other side came Jemimah’s tone, lowered and careful, as though afraid to disturb what little peace remained.

Jemimah (softly):
It’s me, Ji.”

Jimmi glanced back at her book, fingers resting on the page. The pause stretched before she responded, measured and distant.

Jimmi (restrained):
Wait. I’ll come out when I’m done. Thanks.

Silence followed, then footsteps shifted slightly outside the door. Jemimah spoke again, her tone carrying hesitation and longing.

Jemimah (tentative):
I just came to say—there’s a family feast happening soon in my hometown. Everyone will be there. Even... Jesh. Should you wish to accompany me, let me know.”

​By the time Jimmi reached the door and pulled it open, the corridor was empty. The air held Jemimah’s words like a lingering perfume, sweet yet heavy. Jimmi leaned against the frame, her chest tightening as the regret she had tried to suppress began to stir.

The next day, sunlight filtered over the path as Jimmi walked to Jemimah’s house. When the door opened, Jimmi stepped forward, her head bowed slightly, humility evident in her stance. Her tone emerged gently, heavy with sincerity.

Jimmi (humbly):
Jemimah... I’m sorry. I was too harsh. Please forgive me.”

Jemimah’s eyes filled instantly. She pulled Jimmi into a tight embrace, both of them trembling as tears flowed freely. The wall of silence between them crumbled, replaced by a profound release—a moment of mercy that felt, for a heartbeat, like something holy.

Jimmi pulled back, wiping her face, her voice steadier now.

Jimmi (earnest):
About the feast… I’ll go with you.”

Jemimah nodded, relief softening her features, though concern still lingered beneath her smile. She released a quiet breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding, her voice lifting with cautious hope as she spoke.

Jemimah (hopeful):
That’s good. I just hope when he sees you, everything will go well.”

Jimmi exhaled slowly, lifting her gaze heavenward as if seeking a sign in the vast blue above. Her words carried a quiet, almost haunting surrender—the peace of someone who has stopped fighting the current.

Jimmi (peaceful):
Let God’s will be done. That’s enough for me.”

Jemimah tilted her head, studying her closely, curiosity mixing with disbelief. Her question slipped out, softer than before.

Jemimah (curious):
You still believe God—even after all this?

Jimmi smiled gently, warmth returning to her eyes. Her voice flowed with conviction, steady and alive.

Jimmi (assured):
Always. His love never lets go of me. Even when I stumble, His grace is the voice that calls me home.”

Jemimah’s voice softened further, the last of her defenses quietly yielding. She lowered her gaze, her breath barely more than a whisper as the words escaped her.

Jemimah (quietly):
Please... pray for me too.

Jimmi reached for her hand, squeezing it firmly. The contact grounded them both. Her answer followed—steady, unhesitating, a promise born of love rather than duty.

Jimmi (faithful):
I always do.”

Jemimah brightened, energy rushing back as anticipation took hold. She clasped her hands together, shoulders lifting with a barely contained bounce. Her voice bubbled out, light and eager, spilling over itself.

Jemimah (excited):
Tomorrow is the program. It’s a three-day family reunion. We need to prepare well. I’ve missed my siblings. Can’t wait to see everyone.”

Jimmi chuckled, a low and easy sound that smoothed the remaining edges of their tension. She shook her head slightly, a genuine amusement warming her eyes as she leaned in, her tone carrying a playful lilt.

Jimmi (teasing):
You see… you were the one rushing things just a moment ago

Jemimah grinned, leaning closer, eyes sparkling with mischief. Her voice dipped into a teasing lilt, soft but unmistakably playful.

Jemimah (grinning):
Or maybe… you can’t wait to see your future husband?

Jimmi burst into laughter, shaking her head as she leaned back, trying—and failing—to suppress her smile. Her tone brightened, colored by an amusement that was both mockingly exasperated and unexpectedly light.

Jimmi (amused):
Will you stop that?

Jemimah clapped her hands, delight brightening her face like a sudden flame. A light laugh bubbled up before she spoke, her voice skipping with a playful excitement that made the future seem bright, golden, and inevitable.

Jemimah (playful):
But it’s true!

Jemimah’s exclamation hung in the air, sparking a fresh wave of mirth that filled the room. 

Jimmi leaned her head back, her own laughter harmonizing with Jemimah’s—a bright, rhythmic sound that seemed to chase away the lingering weight of their heavy confrontation.

The following day, both traveled to Jemimah’s hometown.

The family gathering burst with color and voices in the compound. Children darted between adults, laughter ringing out. Elders exchanged warm greetings, hands clasping firmly. 

The air carried celebration layered with reverence, as though unseen witnesses lingered among them.

​Jemimah walked in with Jimmi by her side, the vibrant energy of the compound swirling around them. 

Jimmi was dressed in a modern, deep forest green dress of heavy crepe that draped with an elegant, expensive weight. A slender gold belt cinched her waist, catching the afternoon sun and flashing with every step. 

Her hair, no longer bound in a tight bun, fell in soft, disciplined waves around her shoulders. Her presence was calm and radiant. She moved with a grounded grace that felt like a pocket of silence in the noisy crowd. 

She looked every bit the part of the high-society feast, yet she remained quietly set apart—like a steady sanctuary flame burning in the middle of a bustling marketplace.

Moments later, Jesh arrived with his family, the heavy doors of the Land Cruiser thudding shut. As they stepped into the compound, their footsteps stirred the dry dust into golden clouds. 

The sunlight caught the sharp lines of their faces, and for a heartbeat, the laughter of the children faltered—the atmosphere bending around their arrival.

​The shift was unmistakable.

What would unfold next… only God could write that chapter.

Afterward, the compound seemed to breathe—anticipation thick, destiny drawing nearer, heaven watching closely as paths prepared to collide.

To be continue...

Written by Agbemawle Atsu Norvishi

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