I THOUGHT IT WAS GOD'S WILL | PART THREE
The evening sun slanted through the thin curtains, painting long golden bars across the living room walls of the small apartment Mary now shared with her husband.
The still air carried only the tick-tock of the wall clock, each strike weighing on the silence.
Mary sat at the edge of the sofa, her fingers interlaced tightly in her lap.
Her chest rose with quiet restraint, her lips parting as if she wanted to speak, but the heavy silence swallowed her readiness.
The door opened. Mark stepped in, shoulders drawn tight, chest rising with a slow, controlled breath as if the words were gathering in his throat.
His jaw clenched, eyes narrowing, scanning the room without softening.
Fingers flexed at his sides before he flung the keys onto the wooden table; the metallic clatter cut through the stillness like a blade.
Mary’s body jolted at the sound, her breath catching, fingers tightening on the chair, eyes lifting to him, bracing for the words about to strike.
Mark's voice was cold and sharp, cutting through the air with authority.
Mark (coldly):
“Dinner’s ready. Don’t be late again next time. I don’t like waiting.”
“Dinner’s ready. Don’t be late again next time. I don’t like waiting.”
The words hung like smoke in the air. The evening glow seemed to dim, shadows stretching darker across the walls.
Mary’s lips trembled before she answered, her tone fragile, her head bowing slightly as though in quiet surrender.
Mary (softly):
“I’m sorry, Mark. I had a meeting at the church office… it ran longer than I expected.”
“I’m sorry, Mark. I had a meeting at the church office… it ran longer than I expected.”
Her apology settled like dust on hard stone. Mark’s jaw tightened, eyes narrowing as though suspicion itself stood between them.
He shifted slightly, letting a slow breath out, shoulders stiff under the weight of his stare. The room seemed to shrink around him, the ticking clock louder in the tense silence.
His words came stern, sharp with accusation and controlled frustration.
Mark (sternly):
“You always have excuses. Always something to justify yourself. Do you think I don’t notice?”
“You always have excuses. Always something to justify yourself. Do you think I don’t notice?”
The weight of his voice pressed on her shoulders. Mary lowered her gaze further, biting the inside of her cheek until the taste of iron rose faintly.
Her hands twitched in her lap, trying to hold still against the storm building in his tone.
Her voice came hesitant, trembling with fear and uncertainty.
Mary (hesitantly):
“I’m doing my best… trying to—”
“I’m doing my best… trying to—”
Her words were cut short as Mark stepped closer, his shadow falling long across her face.
He inhaled slowly, jaw tightening, shoulders tensing as his gaze fixed on her.
Fingers curled slightly at his sides, chest rising with a measured breath, the air thickening with the words he was about to release.
Mark (anger):
“Your best? That’s never enough, Mary. You promised me attention, care… in front of the pastor and before the congregation but you’re always somewhere else. Always.”
“Your best? That’s never enough, Mary. You promised me attention, care… in front of the pastor and before the congregation but you’re always somewhere else. Always.”
The air thickened, as if unseen chains wrapped around the room. Mary’s throat tightened.
She drew in a shaky breath, fingers trembling as they lifted slightly, chest rising with the effort of steadying herself.
Slowly, she rose, hand reaching toward him as though to calm the storm, gathering her words before they escaped.
Mary (pleading):
“Mark, please… I’m trying. I want us to—”
“Mark, please… I’m trying. I want us to—”
Before her sentence could take shape, Mark waved his hand with sharp dismissal, his eyes cold, his voice cutting like iron.
Mark (sharply):
“Stop. I don’t need your explanations.”
“Stop. I don’t need your explanations.”
Her knees buckled, and she sank back onto the sofa, heart pounding like a drum of lament.
The once warm sunlight that had filled the room now pressed down like a weight, turning every familiar object into an oppressor.
She watched him move briskly about the room, hands flexing at his sides as if the words were coiling in his throat before release.
His commands sliced the quiet like whips, while her chest burned with unspoken cries.
Mark (harsh):
“And another thing! Don’t think I don’t notice how you still smile at others like you did with your… old friends. Do you want to embarrass yourself?”
“And another thing! Don’t think I don’t notice how you still smile at others like you did with your… old friends. Do you want to embarrass yourself?”
The accusation pierced her like an arrow. Her lips quivered, and her voice faltered, thinner than a breath.
Mary (faintly):
“I… I wasn’t…”
“I… I wasn’t…”
But he did not allow the softness to remain. He advanced with words like hammer blows, eyes glinting with suspicion.
Mark (interrupting):
“Don’t lie to me. I know your thoughts. You think I won’t find out, but I do. You need to adjust—now.”
“Don’t lie to me. I know your thoughts. You think I won’t find out, but I do. You need to adjust—now.”
Mary’s palms clenched tight against each other, nails digging into her skin. He strode toward the kitchen, voice coiling with tension before it spilled into the room.
Mark (commanding):
“Make sure dinner’s ready on time tomorrow. And don’t forget, I expect the house spotless. No excuses.”
“Make sure dinner’s ready on time tomorrow. And don’t forget, I expect the house spotless. No excuses.”
His retreating figure carried command even in silence. Mary’s lips pressed shut into a thin line. She nodded faintly, but the nod was more to herself than to him, her spirit folding inward.
The apartment itself seemed to close in, the walls tightening like a cage.
She rose with heavy steps, each movement measured as if the very floor might betray her. In the kitchen, the faint hum of the refrigerator and the clink of plates echoed louder than they should.
Her hands sank into the basin of warm soapy water, scrubbing absent-mindedly, while her mind drifted far away.
The following morning, the apartment carried a chill sharper than the air outside.
The blinds cut the sunlight into harsh stripes, laying them across the kitchen counter where Mary stood, quietly preparing breakfast.
The smell of coffee rose rich and steady, but it did not warm the heaviness pressing in her chest.
Her shoulders curved slightly as she worked, her lips parting as if she might sigh, but no sound came.
The doorway filled suddenly. Mark stepped in with a brisk stride, his face set, his presence slicing through the room like the morning light itself.
His eyes locked on the counter, his mouth already shaping words before Mary could lift her gaze.
Mark (impatiently):
“Why is the toast taking so long? Did you forget the eggs too?”
“Why is the toast taking so long? Did you forget the eggs too?”
The sharpness in his voice seemed to echo against the tiled walls. Mary’s fingers stilled for a moment on the pan, then she drew in a steady breath.
She turned slightly, her expression careful, her voice soft but even, as though choosing each word with prayerful restraint.
Mary (carefully):
“No, Mark. Everything is almost ready. I just wanted to make sure it’s warm for you.”
“No, Mark. Everything is almost ready. I just wanted to make sure it’s warm for you.”
Her words drifted gently, but they did not soothe. Mark’s steps closed the space between them, his shadow stretching over the counter, his tone cutting with impatience.
Mark (snapping):
“Warm? It should have been ready the moment I stepped in. You think this is some game? I don’t have time for mistakes.”
“Warm? It should have been ready the moment I stepped in. You think this is some game? I don’t have time for mistakes.”
The plates clinked as Mary hurried into the dining hall, setting them down with trembling hands.
She arranged the food neatly on the table, hoping the quiet might soften him, chest tightening with every careful motion.
Mark’s eyes followed her, narrowing, shoulders stiffening as he stepped closer, each measured breath coiling the tension before his words cut through the room.
Mark (dangerous):
“And don’t even think about sitting there staring at me. Sit like a proper wife should, or get out of my way.”
The words pressed on her chest. Mary’s lips sealed into a thin line as she pulled out the chair quietly.
She lowered herself with quiet grace, eyes fixed on her plate as though the food could shield her from his gaze. Each bite felt heavy, her throat tightening.
Mark picked up his fork, jaw tensing, shoulders stiffening as he drew in a slow, controlled breath, letting the tension coil in his chest before his words cut the quiet.
Mark (curt):
“You’re too quiet. Speak. I don’t like silence hanging around me.”
“You’re too quiet. Speak. I don’t like silence hanging around me.”
The fork in Mary’s hand paused mid-air. Her voice came as barely more than a breath, quivering under the weight of his command.
Mary (softly):
“I… I was just… eating.”
“I… I was just… eating.”
The quiet reply drew only sharper disdain. Mark leaned back, his face hard, his tone striking louder.
Mark (sharper):
“Just eating? You think life is just about surviving meals? You need to act like someone who belongs here, Mary. Do you even know how to keep a home properly?”
“Just eating? You think life is just about surviving meals? You need to act like someone who belongs here, Mary. Do you even know how to keep a home properly?”
The morning light crept further across the floor, marking time that felt endless.
Mary placed her fork gently on the plate, hands trembling despite her effort to still them. Her breath caught in her chest, gaze locked downward.
The chair scraped the floor as he stood. He turned sharply and strode out. The door clicked shut with finality, leaving the dining hall heavy and still.
Mary sat motionless, her fingers tracing the rim of the plate as though searching for steadiness.
The city outside carried on—car horns, distant chatter—but inside, the air pressed down like a closed fist.
Mary’s lips parted at last, the whisper barely rising above the clock’s ticking.
Mary (whispering):
“Lord… help me…”
“Lord… help me…”
Her forehead sank into her palm. A solitary tear slipped free, running down her cheek and staining the silence with a plea too deep for words.
The months rolled by, and the warmth Mary once longed for in her new marriage dimmed like a fading ember in the hearth.
The apartment that once carried the scent of fresh flowers now hung heavy with the cold odor of neglect.
Mark’s temper had hardened, his voice often rising in harsh tones that echoed off the walls, leaving the silence wounded each time.
The apartment door clicked shut, footsteps echoing softly across the floor as Mark returned from work.
Mary sat by the dining table that evening, hands brushing nervously across the edge, chest rising with a careful, measured breath.
Her lips parted slightly, eyes lifting to meet his as if gathering courage before letting the words escape.
Mary (gently):
"Mark, how was work today?"
"Mark, how was work today?"
The ticking clock filled the quiet, but Mark turned sharply, shoulders stiffening as he drew in a controlled breath.
Shadows deepened across his face, his eyes narrowing, as the words gathered in his chest before striking.
Mark (snapping):
"Mary! I told you to stop asking questions about my work. Do you think I have time for your nagging?"
"Mary! I told you to stop asking questions about my work. Do you think I have time for your nagging?"
The air tightened, Mary’s shoulders sinking as her voice broke into the stillness.
Mary (quietly):
"I… I just wanted to know… nothing more."
"I… I just wanted to know… nothing more."
Her words barely reached him. He stepped closer, drawing a slow, controlled breath as the tension coiled in his throat before the words struck.
His glare cut through the air like a knife, the atmosphere pressing down like a storm about to break.
Mark (glaring):
"Nothing more? Everything you do annoys me. Just… stay out of my way."
"Nothing more? Everything you do annoys me. Just… stay out of my way."
The room felt colder. The walls seemed to draw closer as Mary lowered her gaze, clutching her hands together as if to hold onto the fragments of hope that remained.
She whispered prayers in her heart, believing love might yet soften him.
A day later, as the evening shadows stretched across the apartment, Mary couldn’t believe her eyes—Mark had brought another woman into the house.
Young and radiant, she moved through the rooms with effortless cheer, her laughter spilling like sunlight on glass, shattering the quiet that had been Mary’s fragile sanctuary.
Every step she took seemed to claim the spaces Mary once held: the sofa where she had dreamed in silence, the windowsill where she had whispered prayers, even the air itself felt invaded.
The woman’s presence was a constant, sharp reminder. She lingered where Mary worked, humming softly, brushing past with a casual intimacy that made Mary’s chest tighten.
She offered small, condescending smiles, tipping her head in mock sympathy whenever Mary faltered.
Each laugh, each careless gesture, each subtle glance from Mark in her direction seemed choreographed to deepen the ache Mary could not speak.
Alone in the bedroom, night pressing in from the corners, Mary’s body trembled. Her hands clutched the blanket, knuckles white, as tears slipped hot onto the fabric.
Her lips parted, quivering, as if gathering courage to give voice to the ache she could not hold inside.
Mary (whispering):
"So… this is my life now?"
"So… this is my life now?"
The night carried her words into silence. The shadows seemed to listen, and her sobs broke against the stillness like waves upon stone.
Weeks later, the final blow came. Mark stood in the living room, his face like stone, his voice stripped of warmth.
The light from the ceiling lamp cast long lines across the floor, and the weight of his words settled like judgment.
Mark (sternly):
"Mary… pack your things. You’re no longer welcome here. The new woman you have been seeing will stay with me. She… will take your place."
"Mary… pack your things. You’re no longer welcome here. The new woman you have been seeing will stay with me. She… will take your place."
Mary’s breath froze, her eyes widening in disbelief. Her hands trembled as she stepped forward, shoulders stiff, chest tight, as if bracing for the words to fall.
Mary (confusion):
"Mark… please, what are you saying? I… I don’t understand."
"Mark… please, what are you saying? I… I don’t understand."
But his hand cut the air, silencing her. His words fell like iron, each one landing heavy in the room.
His shoulders squared, eyes cold, breath measured as the weight of his decision filled the space.
Mark (firm):
"There is nothing to understand. I’ve moved on. You need to leave. Now."
"There is nothing to understand. I’ve moved on. You need to leave. Now."
Her knees weakened, tears catching the dim light as they ran down her cheeks. She reached out, fingers trembling, as if her words could still bridge the distance between them.
Mary (broken):
"But… we vowed… I loved you… I trusted you…"
"But… we vowed… I loved you… I trusted you…"
He turned away, his shoulders rigid, his tone colder than the walls around them. A faint exhale escaped him, the air carrying the finality of his words.
Mark (cold):
"Love? Trust? That’s meaningless now. Go."
"Love? Trust? That’s meaningless now. Go."
Her voice wavered, barely carrying over the silence of the apartment. Fingers trembled as she reached forward, eyes glistening with unshed tears.
Mary (pleading):
"Please… Mark… not now… it’s late… I… I have nowhere else to go…"
"Please… Mark… not now… it’s late… I… I have nowhere else to go…"
He didn’t flinch. His shoulders remained stiff, his gaze fixed on the floor, each second stretching like iron between them.
The clock ticked loudly in the quiet apartment, marking every heartbeat of her panic.
Hot tears streamed down Mary’s cheeks, and her shoulders shook with quiet sobs.
Her fingers trembled at her sides, lips quivering as she drew in ragged breaths, gathering the courage to speak.
Mary (sobbing):
"Just… give me a moment… I’ll pack… I’ll leave quietly… I promise… don’t send me out into the night!"
"Just… give me a moment… I’ll pack… I’ll leave quietly… I promise… don’t send me out into the night!"
A sharp chill entered the room as Mark’s shoulders stiffened, his gaze hardening into the floor. The silence stretched, heavy and waiting, before his voice cut through like ice.
Mark (final):
"No. Tonight. You must leave. Now."
"No. Tonight. You must leave. Now."
The silence that followed pressed against Mary’s chest like a crushing weight. Gathering her few belongings, she walked out of the home she had once entered with hope.
Each step was heavy, her heart shattered, her dreams trailing behind her like broken glass scattered on the road.
As she stepped into the street, the night breeze brushed her face, carrying with it the ache of betrayal.
Her hands trembled slightly at her sides. She drew in a shivering breath, lips parting just before the words spilled out.
Mary (muttering):
"Everything… gone… just like that."
"Everything… gone… just like that."
Alone under the dim streetlights, shadows stretched long and cold. The distant hum of the city pressed in, each sound echoing the emptiness that now filled her.
She pulled her coat tighter, wrapping herself as if it could hold together the fragments of a life that had slipped through her fingers.
Somewhere in the night, a single thought clung stubbornly to her mind—the world she had known was gone, and there was no turning back.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Written by Agbemawle Atsu Norvishi
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