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STAINS ON THE CROSS | PART EIGHT

Atmospheric cover art for Stains on the Cross, depicting a radiant cross in a sun-drenched courtyard with the ©Aatsujnk watermark in the top right.

The sun shone high—bright as a small bell that rang lightly, its imagined chime cutting through the open compound with a clean, deliberate clarity. 

Heat rested on tiled ground and chairs, and a faint breeze stirred the dust near the low walls. The public address system hummed once, then steadied.

The chairman stepped forward, fingers adjusting the microphone with practiced ease. The scrape of sandals slowed, murmurs thinned, and one by one, voices fell silent as attention locked onto him.

Families were called one after another. They rose together—husbands and wives side by side, children clinging to skirts, cousins nudging each other with laughter, grandparents walking slowly with proud, measured smiles. 

Each family moved forward as a single body, applause following them in waves, cheerful banter bouncing off the compound walls.

Then Jesh’s family was called.

They stood—everyone rising at once.

All—except Jesh.

He stood alone.

A ripple of laughter rolled through the crowd, starting low, then spreading from one corner of the compound to another. Dust shifted under restless feet, and the mood tipped toward playful mockery. 

The chairman leaned into the microphone, eyes bright with amusement, letting the moment breathe before speaking. His voice rang out, playful and loud, cutting cleanly through the laughter.

Chairman (joking):
Ah, Jesh… where are your wife and children? Or have you hidden them from us today?

The crowd responded instantly—chuckles swelling, shoulders shaking, a few fingers pointing before dropping again. 

Jesh’s smile twitched under the weight of attention, and the air seemed to press closer around him. He let out a nervous chuckle, rubbing the back of his neck as the sound closed in. 

Dust swirled faintly at his feet as he shifted his stance, searching for words. His tone lifted, unsure but respectful, threading through the noise.

Jesh (awkward):
Sir, I—

Before the sentence could land, the chairman’s hand rose. The gesture sliced through the moment, and the microphone hummed softly as authority settled back over the compound. 

The laughter thinned but did not fully die. The chairman's voice was firm and clipped, leaving no room for further appeal.

Chairman (firm):
No excuses. You have honour, wealth, and respect—yet no woman by your side? If you do not choose today, we will choose for you.”

Laughter erupted again, louder, sharper. The compound vibrated with it—chairs creaking, dust lifting, the sound rolling upward into the open sky as though testing the heavens themselves.

At the back, Jimmi lowered her head. Her eyes closed, and her fingers tightened together until her knuckles paled. Breath trembled in her chest as faith wrestled fear, the noise around her fading into a dull roar.

Her prayer slipped out, barely louder than her breath, carried on the thin space between hope and desperation.

Jimmi (praying):
Oh Lord… touch his heart. Even if he does not know yet… let him choose rightly.

The wind brushed past her cheek, and somewhere nearby, a child stilled. Jimmi shifted her chair slightly, aligning herself where Jesh’s eyes might naturally fall. 

Sunlight caught her face, illuminating the quiet resolve set beneath her trembling calm.

The laughter ebbed as Jesh lifted his chin. His shoulders squared, and something steadied in his gaze. When he spoke, his voice rose clear and measured, cutting through the compound with conviction that carried beyond the moment.

Jesh (calmly):
Sir, I am grateful. But I seek more than beauty or status. I desire holiness—both within and without. Not perfection, but a heart yielded to God.”

A hush fell. Children froze mid-fidget, hands paused in the air. Leaves above seemed to hold their breath, and even the breeze softened. 

The chairman stared, momentarily speechless, the microphone suddenly heavy in his hand. When his voice returned, it carried disbelief sharpened by challenge.

Chairman (mocking):
In your church, are there no women? With all your houses and money, no woman is good enough? Speak again and I will marry you off by force.

A nervous murmur stirred—half laughter, half unease—moving like a low tide across the compound. Eyes darted between Jesh and the chairman, and something unseen tightened in the atmosphere.

Before Jesh could answer, a chair scraped softly against the ground. The sound cut through the murmuring like a blade. 

Shiloh rose slowly, her presence steady, commanding without force. The space around her seemed to expand as her voice rose gently, carrying a weight that settled over the gathering.

Shiloh (respectful):
Chairman, please. Jesh already has someone in mind.”

The crowd leaned forward as one—necks craning, whispers gathering like wind through tall grass. 

Shiloh turned, lifting her hand with careful intention, her gaze fixed and unwavering. Her words followed, calm and certain.

Shiloh (assured):
She is there… sitting at the corner.

A murmur swept the compound, chairs shifting, sandals scraping. The chairman leaned forward, squinting past rows of heads and shoulders, curiosity sharpening his tone.

Chairman (demanding):
Where? Bring her out.”

Jemimah’s fingers closed around Jimmi’s hand. With gentle pressure, she guided her forward. Heads turned in unison, whispers rising and falling like breath. 

Jimmi stepped into the open—modest, composed—her footsteps slow, deliberate, each one echoing louder than it should have.

Jesh’s expression changed. Confusion clouded his features as recognition wrestled with doubt. His voice came guarded, restrained by disappointment that cut deeper than anger.

Jesh (restrained):
With respect… she altered herself to gain my attention. This is not who she is.”

Gasps scattered across the compound. A chair creaked somewhere behind them. The breeze picked up, dragging dust across the ground as though the earth itself reacted.

Jemimah stepped forward quickly, hands trembling. Tears shimmered in her eyes as guilt broke through her composure, her breath hitching before she spoke.

Jemimah (tearful):
It is my fault. I pushed her. I deceived her with the idea of marriage… I wanted her to appear less holy so I would not feel small. I never meant to ruin her.”

Silence pressed down hard and heavy. Even the memory of earlier music felt distant, swallowed whole. The air thickened, as though something unseen weighed every heart, demanding truth.

The chairman exhaled slowly. His shoulders lowered, and when he spoke again, his tone carried thought instead of jest.

Chairman (thoughtful):
Well, this is a startling confession. But even this account cannot settle everything. Let her speak for herself.”

Jimmi lifted her chin. Tears clung to her lashes, but they did not fall. When her voice emerged, it was steady, anchored by truth that had been tested and held.

Jimmi (steady):
My name is Jimmi… my intention was not to marry Jesh through deceit.”

She leaned forward slightly, breath catching as courage rose in her chest. A quiet exhale braced her, and her words carried the weight of hard-won faith.

Jimmi (resolute):
I fell. But God lifted me. Whether Jesh marries me or not… I belong to Jesus.”

A deep stillness followed—heavy yet clean. The laughter was gone. The dust settled. It was as though the air itself had been purified, leaving behind a silence of quiet victory, pure and unchallenged.

A light breeze moved through the gathered crowd, stirring dust and murmurs alike. The chairman turned slowly toward Jesh, his presence steady, the moment tightening as though the air itself leaned in to listen. His words came measured.

Chairman (direct):
Jesh, come closer to her.

A hush rippled outward. Jesh stepped forward, each pace deliberate. The space between him and Jimmi narrowed, and the sounds of the compound seemed to fade into a distant hum. 

As his gaze rested on her face, memory rose quietly within him, shaping his voice before it reached the air.

Jesh (reflective):
Sir… I met her before. She led the chorus during a five-day program at our church. After the meeting, I approached her wearing a blue suit…

The crowd shifted, curiosity thickening like heat over stone. Whispers brushed the edges of the silence. Jesh’s tone softened further, remembrance coloring every word as it carried forward.

Jesh (gentle):
She did not lift her head to look at me when I wanted to speak with her. Her reply was, ‘I’m sorry. I’m not interested,’ and she turned away.”

A sharp breath broke through the stillness. Jimmi stiffened, her eyes widening as recognition struck. The ground seemed to tilt beneath her as her voice burst out, raw and unguarded.

Jimmi (shocked):
What? Are you… that brother in the blue suit?

Tears spilled freely now, darkening the dusty tiles at her feet. The compound felt suddenly smaller, the sky closer, as her apology fell in broken pieces, heavy with truth.

Jimmi (sobbing):
I’m sorry. I didn’t know it was you.”

A gentle quiet followed, settling like a balm. Jesh’s expression eased, confusion melting away as a soft smile took its place. Warmth entered his tone, steady and sure, spreading through the gathered hearts.

Jesh (smiling):
When I saw you here, I didn’t know whether to approach or wait. But now, it’s clear—God has brought us together.”

The breeze slowed, as though listening. Jesh paused, allowing the moment to breathe. His shoulders relaxed, his breath evening out, patience and relief resting visibly upon him before his next words emerged, low and reverent.

Jesh (softly):
My waiting was not in vain.”

Jimmi brushed her cheeks with trembling hands, nodding as gratitude and relief washed over her. The tightness in her chest gave way, and her voice carried honest humility.

Jimmi (tearfully):
I truly appreciate your waiting love. Thank you for not giving up on me.”

Jesh closed the remaining distance, careful, respectful. The space between them felt set apart, hushed and sacred. His question arrived gently, hopeful without pressure.

Jesh (gentle):
Now… can I speak with you?

Jimmi lifted her head fully this time, meeting his eyes without fear. Her answer came quiet but open, carried on a steady breath.

Jimmi (soft):
Sure.”

A lighter current passed through Jesh’s tone, easing the weight of the moment. A hint of playfulness surfaced, softening the edges.

Jesh (teasing):
I thought you would lower your head and walk away again.”

Laughter broke loose across the compound, rolling like waves against stone walls. Faces brightened. Jimmi turned toward Jemimah, both women laughing through lingering tears as joy and release mingled freely in the open air.

The chairman’s voice rose again, full and amused, cutting cleanly through the noise.

Chairman (laughing):
Jesh, hurry and propose to her lest I give her to another man.”

Another burst of laughter followed, louder this time. The joy shook the space itself. One of Jesh’s cousins sprang to his feet, bold and grinning, stepping forward and stretching out a hand toward Jimmi. 

Instantly, Jesh moved, spreading his arms wide and blocking the path, drawing cheers and renewed laughter from every side.

The compound trembled with mirth.

Then—silence fell.

It was sudden, deep, almost holy. Jesh turned fully toward Jimmi. The crowd, the walls, the sky—all seemed to fade as their eyes locked. Time slowed. His voice emerged with gravity, each word deliberate, weighted with purpose.

Jesh (earnest):
Jimmi—will you marry me?

A breath passed, suspended. Then Jimmi nodded, tears shining as her answer broke free, certain and full.

Jimmi (joyful):
Yes… with joy.”

The silence shattered into celebration. Cheers erupted. Hands clapped. Voices lifted in praise and laughter. Some wiped tears from their eyes; others raised their hands heavenward, overwhelmed with gladness.

The chairman lifted both hands, authority and celebration joining seamlessly. His voice surged forward, jubilant and commanding, riding above the sound before settling firmly over the crowd.

Chairman (proclaiming):
Today shall be remembered forever. Beauty for ashes. From waiting to rejoicing. What a testimony!

Sunlight spilled across the compound, brighter than before, glinting off faces and tiles alike, as though heaven itself leaned close in approval. The air felt lighter, cleansed, charged with peace.

As the noise softened into laughter and spontaneous songs, Jimmi closed her eyes for a brief moment. Calm flooded her spirit—deep, settled, and pure. The heaviness that once clung to her heart was gone.

The air stood clear. Victory rested in the silence beneath the joy.

And the story of enduring love—shaped by trials, mistakes, repentance, and divine orchestration—reached its long-awaited turning point, resting quietly and securely in the faithful hands of God.

To be continue...

Written by Agbemawle Atsu Norvishi

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